This is a page from the book I have been working on forever. The little girl here is the main character along with her little brother. I have made and remade roughs quite a few times. I just put the new roughs into a 32 page document and laid out the text. I'm pretty happy with the text and the layout now. I just need to refine the sketches. Then I need to finish a couple of the pages in color. I will post more pictures later. I'll be bringing this in to my critique group again soon. I look forward to their feedback.